Der'an Revamped

I just decided to completely change Der'an's look. I made him much larger and bulkier. He still always wears that armor, but I changed the appearance dramatically. Tell me what you think of his new look.
lemme give you guys his new profile:

Name: Der'an

Age: in his 30's or 40's

Eye Color: Brown

Height: 7'

Antennae Style: More stiff and horn-like (due to his vortian blood)

Bio: He was a soldier for the empire, an extremely low ranking one. Rem saw his potential and recruited him. They became friends, like brothers, and when Rem became a rebel, Der'an was one of his best rebel soldiers. He has a lot of scars. There isn't much skin left on him that isn't scar-tissue. He's a half-vortian. This earned him the title of "freak". He didn't get much punishment for this, just a few extra whippings. As a result, he has scars on his torso. However, the real scarring came during Zephyr. Second-, Third-, Fourth-degree burns. Deep cuts. all healed, but his skin became a hardened shell of scars.